I thought it was very realistic. In fact, the most common person that dying men call out to in the battlefield is to their mother. So I could very much imagine it.

...I was like, he's just come out of a coma, he's hardly going to be acting like twat of the year, is he?

Haha, oh, I love your comment. Who said that they couldn't? What I can't imagine is Tony getting up and insulting everyone in sight. lol

Oh, well, I'm glad you finished it, as it was very good. ;)